The Stare
I never stare at anyone unless that anyone stares at me. But this time, it was an exception. I was traveling in a bus from Bombay to Pune. I boarded the bus at 6 am and was looking forward to have a nice sleep in the bus. I got a back seat and was seated next to this guy who too was looking drowsy. As soon as the bus started, I pulled my eye-covers over my eyes and tried to fall asleep. And as I was about to fall asleep, I felt something hitting my head. It did not take much time to make out that the guy next to me had found a comfortable pillow in my head. I pulled out portion of the eye-cover over my left eye and stared at him. Had it been a girl with silky, smooth, soft and shampooed hair, then I might have been more considerate. But this guy certainly deserved that stare ;-) After this, things were fine for five minutes. Then this guy again started leaning on me. I could not take it any more. I pulled myself out of that reclining position, turned towards him and with the eye-covers still on stared for a good two seconds in a direction where I felt his face would be. Immediately I could hear him move and shift away from me. After that stare, for the entire journey, I had absolutely no problems.
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**Had it been a girl with silky, smooth, soft and shampooed hair, then I might have been more considerate.
lol u meanie Neel!
Keshi.
I guess that was your "stare"way to heaven ;)
Keshi : Yes, at times I am very mean :-)
Ms V : Indeed. Had a heavenly sleep after that
Hahaha, that is funny. I think I would have asked him to lean the other way the first time. You were to nice. He was probably trying to stay awake and didn't realize that he fell your way.
neel,
nice one there!! just started rdng ur blog btw. n ya, cant help but say, aankhon ka kiya good use!!
At times!?! Ummm...
neel,
had rd ur last post yday, n also commented on it. rd a few more tday.
u have a knack of writing extremely interesting and different (pardon the cliche') posts. congrats for that. keep up the good work.
p.s.: ever done freelance writing or journalism? :)
SRI
you rat...
**Had it been a girl with silky, smooth, soft and shampooed hair,
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then I would be using her head as a pillow instead...
(a more realistic ending if i may say so myself..!!!
Exseno : :-) Yes, I am a ncie guy
Srilaxmi : Keep reading my blog! Nice to know that you like my writing. Nope, I have never done freelancing or writing journals before..
FMOE : You think I am always mean? After so many months of knowing you, you still think that? :-0
TTA : Bingo! You are the smartest of the lot
..hehe , too bad is not what you think :P * girl with silky,smooth and shampooed hair*
...hope u meet her next journey hehe ^_^ goodluck yaar!
kudos to Neel....I just wish these subtle ideas came to me...
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